--- a/MHMC/2025-08-21/notes.txt	Sat Oct 18 19:35:30 2025 +0100
+++ b/MHMC/2025-08-21/notes.txt	Sat Oct 18 19:37:32 2025 +0100
@@ -56,18 +56,19 @@
 to be involved as regards closures of (parts of) the Meeting House.
 
 Cafe not at the front of our list at this time, but making the Foyer
-a more welcoming and restful space.
+a more welcoming and restful space is.
 
-Cleaning contract is under review, with new quotes coming in, does
-require real living wage.
+Cleaning contract is under review, with new quotes coming in, all
+quotes received do require real living wage.
 
 Third tier of pricing for long-term small local groups?
 
-Prepare to think about Fringe 2026, AM on 10 September
+We need to prepare to think about Fringe 2026, AM on 10 September at
+our meeting on Monday.
 
 Date of next meeting: 1 September at 1500, 7 VT
 
-[Draft minute]
+We agreed the following minute
 
 *New budget approach*
 
@@ -92,7 +93,7 @@
 forthcoming, but at this point we want to set out the following
 points:
 
-  * We endorse the "fabric-first" approach to  insulation, heating
+  * We endorse the "fabric-first" approach to insulation, heating
     and ventilation put forward by John Renshaw, it's entirely
     consistent with our own priorities;
 
@@ -102,8 +103,9 @@
   * We expect to propose some small changes to space usage elsewhere
     to enable new letting possibilities for the Library;
 
-  * Subject to the outcome of John Renshaw's exploration of "...", we
-    propose to make the Creche a self-contained long-term let.
+  * Subject to the outcome of John Renshaw's exploration of some
+    aspects of the relevant walls and doors, we propose to make the
+    Creche a self-contained long-term let.
 
 In each of the latter three cases, starting from the material already
 shared with Martin Ward in an email on 19 August, we aim to provide