--- a/twt_review.txt	Wed Apr 30 16:12:05 2025 +0100
+++ b/twt_review.txt	Thu May 01 11:35:23 2025 +0100
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@
            "represented as a JSON Object" ->
            'represented as UTF-8 encoded "JSON text" as defined in RFC 8529'
 
-      e) Include RFC 8529 in the 13.1
+      e) Include RFC 8529 in 13.1
 
  Appendix B.
 
@@ -108,19 +108,68 @@
 
      In the first figure, construed as a "JSON text", the o-umlaut
      glyph denotes a single Unicode character in a six-character
-     object member's value.
-
-     Construed as depicting a JSON object, the o-umlaut denotes a
-     single Unicode code-point (U+00F6), either in the abstract or in
-     some implementation-dependent internal representation, part of an
-     object member value.
+     representation of a six-character object member string value.
 
      However in the second figure, second alternative, the o-umlaut
      corresponds to a _two_-byte UTF-8 sub-part of the JSON encoding of
      that value as a seven-byte UTF-8 byte sequence, either in some
      internal representation or an external stream or file.
 
-     What to do?  
+     What to do?  First, add something similar to
+     https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-bray-unichars-14.html#name-notation
+     Then, whenever presenting JSON, always indicate whether what is
+     being shown is JSON text or JSON-encoded text (i.e. UTF-8 encoded
+     JSON text).  In JSON text, always include a version using the
+     U+xxxx notation whenever the underlying string contains non-ASCII
+     characters.  In JSON-encoded text, _always_ use the %xnn notation
+     for non-ASCII characters.  
+
+     Some examples of a possible way of indicating JSON text and
+     JSON-encoded text, from section 4.2.1
+
+     Replace the first figure with these two:
+
+     _________________________________________________________
+     |*JT*                                                    |
+     |                                                        |
+     |  ["_26bc4LT-ac6q2KI6cBW5es", "family_name", "Möbius"]  |
+     |                                               ^        |
+     |                                               |        |
+     |                                             X+00F6     |
+     |                                                        |
+     |________________________________________________________|
+
+     _______________________________________________________________
+     |*J-ET*                                                         |
+     |                                                               |
+     |  ["_26bc4LT-ac6q2KI6cBW5es", "family_name", "M%xc3%xb6bius"]  |
+     |                                                               |
+     |_______________________________________________________________|
+
+  and the first bullet of the three alternatives which follow with
+
+     * A different way to encode the unicode o-umlaut:
+
+     ______________________________________________________________
+     |*JT*                                                         |
+     |                                                             |
+     |  ["_26bc4LT-ac6q2KI6cBW5es", "family_name", "M\x00f6bius"]  |
+     |                                                             |
+     |_____________________________________________________________|
+
+     ______________________________________________________________
+     |*J-ET*                                                       |
+     |                                                             |
+     |  ["_26bc4LT-ac6q2KI6cBW5es", "family_name", "M\x00f6bius"]  |
+     |                                                             |
+     |_____________________________________________________________|
+
+      WyJfMjZiYzRMVC1hYzZxMktJNmNCVzVlcyIsICJmYW1pbHlfbmFtZSIsICJNX
+      HUwMGY2Yml1cyJd
+
+  And throughout the examples in Appendix A, label the initial figure
+  with *JT* and the 'Content' boxes with *J-ET*.  You don't need to
+  gloss every Chinese/German strings with their U+xxxx version. 
 
 *Nits*