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+Document: 
+Intended RFC status: Proposed Standard
+Review type: artart - Last Call review
+Reviewer: Henry S. Thompson
+Review Date: 
+IETF Last Call Date: 
+
+Summary: 
+
+Caveat: I'm not familiar with the group comms family of RFCs or the
+applications they support, so this review is from an outsider's
+perspective.
+
+Minor points
+
+Section @. I note that one of the two referenced examples of candidate
+application profiles, "A publish-subscribe architecture for the
+Constrained Application Protocol (CoAP)" [1], has expired.  I'm not
+sure how much it matters to have reasonably mature examples, but
+without _some_ good reasons to suppose that there's a community out
+there waiting to implement this framework, its future does seem a bit
+shaky...  There is of course a chicken-and-egg problem here which may
+explain the lack of progress.
+
+Section 2. This is the first point where the actual connection between
+ACE and this document is made clear, that is, that the KDC is the
+Resource Server _per ACE_.  Simply adding ", per ACE," to "Resource
+Server" in para 2 of Section 1 would do the trick.
+
+Nits
+
+[1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub-12