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author Henry S. Thompson <ht@inf.ed.ac.uk>
date Tue, 02 Jul 2024 13:47:11 +0100
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1 Document: draft-ietf-extra-processimip-07
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2 Intended RFC status: Proposed Standard
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3 Review type: artart - Last Call review
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4 Reviewer: Henry S. Thompson
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5 Review Date: 2024-06-28
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6 Result:
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8 *Summary*
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10 *Substantive points*
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12 Section 4: "based on the iTIP method (see Section 1.4 of [RFC5546]) of
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13 the message, calendar objects are created, updated or deleted..." --
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14 but the introduction says "sometimes the enclosed iCalendar [RFC5545]
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15 data does not include an iTIP method property".
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17 I'm confused at this point: If there _is_, for example, an iTIP
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18 "REQUEST" method specified, does the processcalendar script _replace_,
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19 _modify_ or _supplement_ that method, or what?
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21 Section 4: "contains calendar data in multiple MIME [RFC2045] parts"
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22 -- This seems underspecified. It makes most sense for multiple
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23 calendar parts all in a single multipart/alternative, but why
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24 shouldn't multiple calendar parts with different semantics be allowed
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25 (possibly nested at some depth) in a multipart/mixed?
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28 *Minor points*
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30 Section 3: I take it that by "capability identifier" is meant
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31 "capability name" or "capability string" as used in RFC5228. Please
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32 change the name of this section to one of these, and include a
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33 reference to 5228.
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35 Section 4: Similarly, in the opening sentence of this section a
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36 reference to 5228 would be welcome.
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38 Section 4: "If the calendar data is malformed in any way" -- this
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39 hides a potential multitude of detail. I presume that in part this
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40 means "malformed according to the media type specified for the
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41 encapsulated calendar data", but also implies something along the
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42 lines of "or if the specified media type is not supported". That is,
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43 no sniffing or just scanning for strings that look like dates.
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47 *Nits*
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49 [iMIP] appears to be an RFC now: iCalendar Message-Based
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50 Interoperability Protocol (iMIP) RFC 6047
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52 ht
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53 --
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55 [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-core-coap-pubsub-12