--- a/diana_horne_20100901.html	Sat Sep 04 11:37:33 2010 -0400
+++ b/diana_horne_20100901.html	Tue Sep 28 15:44:10 2010 -0400
@@ -57,7 +57,7 @@
    <p>At the request of SE Scotland Area Meeting, Diana, Henry and Mary met over supper at Mary's flat on 1 September 2010.
  After a pleasant supper and some quiet worship, we moved into a conversation
 about Diana's experience with Friends and her desire to become a member.</p>
-   <p>An Anglican by birth (although her father would subsequently spend some
+   <p>An Anglican by birth (although her father had previously spent some
 time calling himself a Quaker), church has always had a place in Diana's life,
 but as an adult she spent many years looking for one in which she could feel
 comfortable.  She had been aware of Quakers as a result of their public