--- a/but_a_way_short.xml	Thu Dec 14 10:13:39 2017 -0500
+++ b/but_a_way_short.xml	Thu Dec 14 10:17:04 2017 -0500
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
    <p>If you only look at the language of belief, you miss a whole different
 way of looking at religious identity.  Choices with respect to the language of
 belief are what distinguish many, even most, Christian denominations, but
-that's something Quakers have declined to play: we don't do creeds.  And we're not the only religion that
+that's something Quakers have stood aside from: we don't do creeds.  And we're not the only religion that
 isn't best understood in terms of belief, and recognising that points us towards a better way to
 distinguish ourselves, by shifting the focus from belief to practice, from
 ortho<emph>doxy</emph> to ortho<emph>praxy</emph>.</p>