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author Henry S. Thompson <ht@inf.ed.ac.uk>
date Tue, 20 Oct 2026 19:49:34 +0100
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1 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-satp-core/
2 Document: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-satp-core-17.html
3 Title: Secure Asset Transfer Protocol (SATP) Core
4 Reviewer: Henry S. Thompson
5 Review Date: Mon Oct 19 13:48:49 2026
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7 *Summary*
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9 As far as I can tell as a non-specialist, the ... is in good shape.
10 There are ... below.
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12 This draft is part of a package of at least three parts, including
13 also _Secure Asset Transfer (SAT) Interoperability Architecture_ and
14 _Secure Asset Transfer (SAT) Use Cases_.
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16 *Minor points*
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18 1.
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20 The restriction to just HTTPS with TLS1.3 is almost certainly not
21 what you want. The use of HTTP/2 or QUIC, which requires use of
22 TLS1.3, should be allowed.
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24 In the Introduction, all that's needed is something along these lines:
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26 Secure transfer mechanisms such as HTTPS with TLS no less than 1.3
27 must be used.
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29 5.3.9 and 5.4 can actually be simplified by switching to language
30 which allows for successor messaging systems which offer the same or
31 better security than HTTPS with TLS1.3.
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33 There might be an argument for a SHOULD support HTTPS with TLS 1.3,
34 but only if there is a strong case for encouraging
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36 [sender/receiver vs. client/server is confusing at best. Cf. ARCH
37 which tries to be clear wrt "sender gateway" and "recipient gateway",
38 but uses "client application" for both "originator" and "beneficiary"]
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40 *Nits*
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42 15.1
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44 RFC 8446 is obsolete, should refer to 9846.
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